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(2020·山东全国统一考试模拟卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。...

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(2020·山东全国统一考试模拟卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。...

(2020·山东全国统一考试模拟卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。

Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray (流浪) dog, until he came to me.

I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.

It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.

There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.

It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?

I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.

The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us?” I questioned my mom.

Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.

Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.

Oneday, Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.  

Almostayearlater, onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly. 

【回答】

【写作指导】 本文是一篇记叙文。作者生动描述了他当时收留一只流浪*的情形,这只小*与家人相处融洽,非常讨人喜欢。然而,事情并非天遂人愿。一天,Spotty 断了一条腿回到了家。续写也由此展开。根据提示“One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.”抓住with a broken leg这几个关键词,充分发挥想象。接下来有两种续写思路:(1)可以专注续写“腿断”的原因;(2)可以重点续写作者如何表示同情以及如何施救。第二段的提示语是“Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.”。barking breathlessly 意味着“在午夜发生了事故”,具体情况可以展开合理想象,加以描述。

【精*范文】

Oneday, Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg. I noticed that one of the dog's legs was bleeding. I immediately realized our Spotty was injured. I ran up to comfort him and tied a bandage around his injured leg, and then gave him some food to eat. I felt very sad. Spotty was still as cute as ever though he had a lame leg. After that, Spotty and I became more friendly. I really appreciated his courage.

Almostayearlater, onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly. I came out to see what had happened. Maybe there was a thief near our house. Maybe there was a robbery nearby. I didn't know. The next morning, we couldn't find our Spotty. I looked for him everywhere, but could find him nowhere. I cried and waited for him. But this time he was gone and never came back.

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