下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其...

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。

注意：       1. 每句不超过两个错误；

        2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

   One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

   That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity(地心引力) !

【回答】

wanted与teach ∧to          72、come→came       73、have→having

immediate→immediately      75、on→at           76、Neither→None

was→were     78、去掉were或looked   79、but→and    80、a→an

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题型：短文改错