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下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在...

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下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在...

下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

    2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分.

Dear Sally,

Now I'd like to tell you anything about my part﹣time job this summer vacation,in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for money,but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's worse,I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my future.In the word,I had a wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing.

【回答】

Dear Sally,

Now I'd like to tell you anything about my part﹣time job this summer vacation,in which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for money,but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's worse,I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something∧can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my future.In the word,I had a wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

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1 anything改为something;代词错误.句意表达的是肯定,表示某件事,不能用anything.  

2 like改为as;动词短语错误.work as担任.   

3 tired改为tiring;分词错误.句中tire作系动词的表语,修饰的是物,要用现在分词构成的形容词;过去分词表示人的感受.   

4 have改为had;句型结构错误.it was the first time+that从句,谓语动词要和前面的系动词保持一致,前面是is,后面用现在完成时态;前面是was,后面用过去完成时态. 

5 for改为去掉;动词错误.support是及物动词,不需要介词;support the family养家糊口.  

6 ask改为asking;动词搭配错误.keep on doing sth持续不断地做某事.   

7 parent改为parents;名词错误.父母是两个人,要用复数.  

8 worse改为more;短语搭配错误.what's worse更糟糕的是;句意表达的是肯定意思,要用what's more而且,还有,表示递进.  

9 加that;句中can't be learnt from textbooks修饰something,是一个定语从句;从句缺少主语,且先行词something是不定代词,要用that来引导. 

10 the改为a;短语搭配错误.in a word总之.

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题型:短文改错