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请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇120词左右的文章。

In a recent survey of 300 Chinese born after 1990, 54 percent of the respondents said they had hair loss, 51 percent had poorer eyesight, 45 percent gained weight and 35 percent had weakened immunity. At the same time, about 65 percent said they always stayed up late. Meanwhile, 56.7 percent of interviewees said they didn't know how to live a healthy life.

Wu Feng, who works at a private company in Beijing, was warned in this year's physical examination report about hyperlipemia, a condition which he ascribed(归因于)to his diet and the fast pace of his life and work.

"At work, I usually sit in the office for hours without moving my body. And when I eat at the canteen, the food is quite oily. What's more, I like to order fast food, such as fried chicken, at night when I work extra hours," Wu said.

A post-90s programmer Wang Ke has been seeing abnormal parameters in his medical report in the past few years. He knew he had some bad habits, but it was not easy for him to change. "I know drinking too much milk tea is unhealthy, but I couldn't stop myself," he said.

【写作内容】(1)用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;

(2)结合上述信息,简要分析不健康的生活方式的危害;

(3)根据你的实际情况,谈谈如何拥有健康的生活方式。

【写作要求】(1)写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

(2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

(3)不必写标题。​

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【回答】

The passage tells us to raise people's awareness of protecting our environment by changing the language.(提高人们环保意识) The Guardian used "global heating" rather than "global warming", which conveys the gravity of climate changes.【高分句型一】(改变用词,传达信息) However, getting these messages through is far from enough.(这样还不够)It is not only the language but also the action that matters.【高分句型二】(语言和行动都重要)

解析：高分句型一:The Guardian used "global heating" rather than "global warming", which conveys the gravity of climate changes.

分析:《卫报》用的是"全球变暖",而不是"全球变暖",这传达了气候变化的严重*.

译文:which引导非限制*定语从句.

高分句型二:It is not only the language but also the action that matters.

分析:重要的不仅是语言,还有行动.

译文:使用强调句.我们在写作文的时候,一般应该把亮点句型放在明显的位置,以便于能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球;同时对于高分句型的使用也要慎重,应该用自己有把握的句子,特别是高考时,应该以正确为首要目的.另外,长短句的搭配使用会使文章显得灵活,不死板,是写作的首选.

知识点：提纲作文

题型：书面表达