近年来，家用汽车与日俱增，汽车的增多对人们的生活有利有弊，请你从以下的参考词汇中至少选5个方面进项描述，并提出...

问题详情：

近年来，家用汽车与日俱增，汽车的增多对人们的生活有利有弊，请你从以下的参考词汇中至少选5个方面进项描述，并提出知道2个合理化的建议。首句已给出，90单词左右。

提示词：fast, convenient(adj.方便的), pollution, environment, health, park(V.停车), save energy(n.能量), the burning of gas(n.汽油)

Today family cars are becoming more and more because___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

例文：

Today family cars are becoming more and more because they are fast and convenient. But cars may bring us trouble, too. As traffic becomes busier, more accidents happen. And the burning of gasoline and the noise of cars pollute the environment. So it’s bad for our health. Moreover, with the increasing number of cars, the lack of parking places will be a big problem, too.

I think more wide roads and parking places should be built, and it’s best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving cars. In this way, we can save energy and reduce pollution at the same time.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，写作时应承接开头，加入提示词，注意材料要求。

2.例文点评：例文时态主要采用一般现在时，第一段叙述家用汽车增长的利弊，第二段提出建议。叙述完整，语句通顺，条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：instead of；In this way；at the same time。

句型：As traffic becomes busier, more accidents happen.（原因状语从句）；it’s best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving cars.

【点睛】

做材料作文时，首先应认真审题，看清材料内容所规定的要求；根据材料内容，列出要点以及要点中可能用到的表达，尽可能运用高级词汇和较复杂的句式以便获得高分，例如本文中的倒装句、主语从句等；然后紧扣要点，开始写作。写完后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误、语法是否合理、字数是否已达要求等。

知识点：个人情况

题型：作文