假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教MsJenkins寫信，...

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假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

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詞數100左右；

可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【回答】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to dome a favor.(點名主題：暑假，請幫忙)

To get some working experience, I plan to find a part-time job in a foreign capital company（要點1：想去外資公司兼職）. I have already finished my job application and personal resume（要點2：已寫好求職申請和個人簡歷）ver, my English is bad. Worse still, I don’t even know much about the format of a personal resume (說出自己的困難). So, I’m writing you a letter , hoping to get your guide and suggestion. You can correct any mistakes yon find in them.(總結，點名寫信目的)

Looking forward to your reply（期盼回覆）. And I’d be really thankful（表達感激之情）. Yours,

Li Hua（結束語）

知識點：提綱作文

題型：書面表達