再讀本試卷閱讀理解A篇材料,依據故事情節,下午MrChen會與David談話。請以“ATalkwithDavi...

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再讀本試卷閱讀理解A篇材料, 依據故事情節, 下午Mr Chen會與David談話。請以“A Talk with David”爲題續寫故事, 詞數100左右。

要求: 1. 仿照閱讀理解A篇材料寫作手法, 採用敘述、對話或二者結合的形式續寫故事;

2. 內容要涉及A篇中的信件、缺課等相關信息以及Mr Chen的建議;

3. 觀點正確、條理清晰、表達流暢;

4. 題目與開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。

A Talk with David

At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.

【回答】

At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.

“Did your mother really write that letter? ”Mr Chen asked.

David's face turned red and then pale. “No, sir, she didn't. I wrote it. I'm very sorry, sir.”

"It's the P. E, isn't it? "said Mr Chen. "You are avoiding something, aren't you? "

“Yes, sir, ”David admitted.

“And what have you been doing these Thursdays? ”Mr Chen asked.

"I have been studying in the library, "replied David eagerly.

“Oh, well, at least you didn't run off to the cinema, "said Mr Chen. "But you were very silly.

What will happen if I report this to your parents and the Principal. "

David felt ashamed of himself.

“But I won't tell anybody-if you promise me two things, "Mr Chen added.

David looked up hopefully.

"I want you to promise never to do anything like this again. If you have any problems, discuss them with your parents or with me first. Mr Long knows all about this. He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights. Talk to him after school on Monday. OK? ”

“Yes, sir, ”said David with a sigh of relief. “Thank you very much. "

David felt happier as he went home.

【解析】本文屬於材料作文，根據A篇閱讀的故事情節進行續寫。根據要表達的內容確定並準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如turn red, at least, run off, look up, promise to do, help sb to do, fear of height以及with的複合結構，增強邏輯關係，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。

知識點：其他

題型：書面表達