Yearsago,Ireceivedgiftfrommyfriendonmybirthdaywhowasnow...

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Years ago, I received gift from my friend on my birthday who was now living far away. It delighted me on the sight of it. It was an artwork of paper cutting, a Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he also sent a letter, in that he informed me of that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several week to learn to make it. That’s why he value it more than any other gifts I received that day. Frank speaking, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I can’t help think of my friend. However far away we are, we feel closely to each other.

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Years ago, I received gift from my friend on my birthday who now living  far away. It delighted me the sight of it. It was an artwork of paper cutting, a   Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he also sent a letter, in he  informed me  of  that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several  to learn to make it. That’s why  value it more than any other gifts I received that  day. speaking, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look  at it, I can’t help of my friend. However far away we are, we feel  to each  other.

第一處:gift前加a。gift是可數名詞,且此處泛指"一個禮物",故需加上不定冠詞a。

第二處:was →is。由時間狀語"now"可知此處應用現在進行時。

第三處:on →at。at the sight of sth."看到,看見",爲固定搭配。

第四處:that →which。分析句子結構可知,此處爲"介詞+關係代詞"引導的定語從句,先行詞是a letter, 故用which。

第五處:去掉that前的of。inform sb. 後可直接接that引導的從句。inform sb. of 後應接名詞、代詞或者動名詞。故of多餘。

第六處:week →weeks。由句中的"several"可知應用名詞的複數形式。

第七處:he →I。本文是以第一人稱來行文的,且由語境可知此處指那是我最爲珍惜這一禮物的原因。故將he改爲I。

第八處:Frank →Frankly。frankly speaking是習慣用法,意爲"坦率地說"。

第九處:think →thinking。can’t help doing sth.意爲"禁不住做某事";can’t help do意爲"不能幫助做某事"。根據語境,此處應用thinking。

第十處:closely →close。系動詞後應用形容詞作表語,故用close。

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯