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閱讀下面的短文，然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

： Liu Feng    Blog                      My 18th Birthday      2010- 4-14 9:29:2

       Today is my 18th birthday, which means that from now on, I am an adult, so it is very fresh to me. I can not forget the happiness and love that my family and friends have given me. To show their love and affection, they held a great ceremony for me at home, and also sent me many kinds of presents, which have left me with great memories.

However, the most unforgettable thing is : a small gift from my English teacher, Jesse.

This morning, after class, Jesse approached me and said “Happy Birthday and here is a card for you”. After thanking him, I carefully opened it:

Dear Liu Feng,

       I sincerely hope the 18th birthday will bring you great happiness all through your life. I have been with you for almost one year, and I find you are a good boy. You are working hard and doing fine in your study, and also I’d like you to have a little change in yourself. Since last month, when you failed in the exam, you have become shy and passive; you seem to have closed your world from others and hesitate to be together with them, which I think is not good for you. To adapt yourself to your future college and social life, find yourself an active life！

Yours,

Jesse”

Reading this, I was moved to tears…

       [寫作內容]

       以上是你的好友劉風在他的Blog裡記錄他*歲生日那天所發生的事, 現在請你依據他Blog裡的內容發表你的看法：

       1．以約30個詞概括Blog的內容；

       2．以約120個詞發表你的看法，幷包括如下要點：

   （1）簡要評價英語老師的做法；

   （2）依據英語老師指出劉風的不足之處，請你任選一點提出改進的建議；

   （3）說明其必要*；

   （4）表達你對他的希望。

       [寫作要求]

       1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．寫作內容中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

【回答】

Love and happiness poured in on Liu Feng’s 18th birthday, a mark of an adult, which has brought him everlasting memories. And his English teacher sent him a birthday card, expressing his best wishes.

       As a student, it’s very lucky to have a teacher full of love and care and treat you as a friend.

You failed in the last exam though you made great efforts, but don’t let failure make you a failure. You must realize that you must have a strong will to face it, or you will be beaten. Moreover, you mustn’t escape it so that you will fall down. Great men are those who suck big benefits from small failures.

       Life is not as smooth as a peaceful lake. 18 means an adult age, and also means a long life journey for you to cover, so you must learn to face any failures.

So, Liu Feng, every man is the master of his own fortune. Be brave and be confident and success will take itself. Remember: “Failure is the mother of success!”

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