改错:(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦厂中学东城校区高三模拟)Sunny31st,JulyItwassunnyto...
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改错:(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦厂中学东城校区高三模拟)
sunny 31st, July
It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon. While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.
Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.
【回答】
【解析】→and 考查连词。学习和城市生活的喧嚣是并列关系,故将or改为and。
→came 考查动词的时态。根据第一句可知,描述过去发生的事情,用一般过去时。故将come改为came。
xing→relaxed 考查形容词。根据语境可知,此处指“我”要放松。故将relaxing改为relaxed。
e→When 考查状语从句的连接词。while “当……的时候”,相当于during the time that,引导时间状语从句,后面常跟时间段,when “当……的时候”,引导时间状语从句,既可跟时间点也可跟时间段。故将While改为When。
→my 考查代词。句意:当我到达公园,进入我视野的是茂盛的绿树。此处表示“我的视野”,故将its改为my。
ses→grass 考查名词。grass指“草坪”时,是不可数名词。故将grasses改为grass。
→at 考查介词。at ease “安逸,舒适”是固定搭配,故将with改为at。
efore→However 考查副词。上文阐述“我”在生态公园里,躺在长满鲜花的草坪上,感到舒适。下文阐述时间过得很快,我必须回家了,前后之间是转折关系,故将Therefore改为However。
9.去掉back 考查动词。return表示“返回”,back是重复表达,故去掉back。
ntic前加a 考查冠词。experience表示“经历”时,是可数名词,此处泛指“一次经历”;such+a/an+adj.+n. (单数)是常用搭配。故在romantic前加a。
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题型:短文改错