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阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

： Liu Feng    Blog                      My 18th Birthday      2010- 4-14 9:29:2

       Today is my 18th birthday, which means that from now on, I am an adult, so it is very fresh to me. I can not forget the happiness and love that my family and friends have given me. To show their love and affection, they held a great ceremony for me at home, and also sent me many kinds of presents, which have left me with great memories.

However, the most unforgettable thing is : a small gift from my English teacher, Jesse.

This morning, after class, Jesse approached me and said “Happy Birthday and here is a card for you”. After thanking him, I carefully opened it:

Dear Liu Feng,

       I sincerely hope the 18th birthday will bring you great happiness all through your life. I have been with you for almost one year, and I find you are a good boy. You are working hard and doing fine in your study, and also I’d like you to have a little change in yourself. Since last month, when you failed in the exam, you have become shy and passive; you seem to have closed your world from others and hesitate to be together with them, which I think is not good for you. To adapt yourself to your future college and social life, find yourself an active life！

Yours,

Jesse”

Reading this, I was moved to tears…

       [写作内容]

       以上是你的好友刘风在他的Blog里记录他*岁生日那天所发生的事, 现在请你依据他Blog里的内容发表你的看法：

       1．以约30个词概括Blog的内容；

       2．以约120个词发表你的看法，并包括如下要点：

   （1）简要评价英语老师的做法；

   （2）依据英语老师指出刘风的不足之处，请你任选一点提出改进的建议；

   （3）说明其必要*；

   （4）表达你对他的希望。

       [写作要求]

       1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．写作内容中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【回答】

Love and happiness poured in on Liu Feng’s 18th birthday, a mark of an adult, which has brought him everlasting memories. And his English teacher sent him a birthday card, expressing his best wishes.

       As a student, it’s very lucky to have a teacher full of love and care and treat you as a friend.

You failed in the last exam though you made great efforts, but don’t let failure make you a failure. You must realize that you must have a strong will to face it, or you will be beaten. Moreover, you mustn’t escape it so that you will fall down. Great men are those who suck big benefits from small failures.

       Life is not as smooth as a peaceful lake. 18 means an adult age, and also means a long life journey for you to cover, so you must learn to face any failures.

So, Liu Feng, every man is the master of his own fortune. Be brave and be confident and success will take itself. Remember: “Failure is the mother of success!”

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