假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，...

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假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意：

词数100左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【回答】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I’d like you to dome a favor.(点名主题：暑假，请帮忙)

To get some working experience, I plan to find a part-time job in a foreign capital company（要点1：想去外资公司兼职）. I have already finished my job application and personal resume（要点2：已写好求职申请和个人简历）ver, my English is bad. Worse still, I don’t even know much about the format of a personal resume (说出自己的困难). So, I’m writing you a letter , hoping to get your guide and suggestion. You can correct any mistakes yon find in them.(总结，点名写信目的)

Looking forward to your reply（期盼回复）. And I’d be really thankful（表达感激之情）. Yours,

Li Hua（结束语）

知识点：提纲作文

题型：书面表达