DearCathy, Iamwritingtosharemyopiniononfashionwithyo...
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Dear Cathy,
I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.
I shall say that it is natural for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. However, I think it is real a waste of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.
What’s more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many other things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect.
As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to.
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Dear Cathy,
I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just
have
heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.
disappointed
I shall say that it is natural for people to care about his
their
appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes
things
will make one more eye-catching. However, I think it is real a waste
really
of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add︿the
to
burden of your parents.
What’s more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many other things in
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which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of
besides
knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect.
As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do
a
hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to (be).
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