Friendshipisveryimportance.Everyoneneedsfriendship.Inal...

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Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.

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第一句：importance改为important

第三句：your改为 our

第四句：getting改为 get; kind改为kinds

第五句：was改为is

第六句： 去掉of

第八句：advices改为advice; persuading改为persuaded

第九句：However改为Therefore；better前加the

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错