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I will share one experience with you．With the college Entrance Examination draw near，I was filled with great anxiety．However，I couldn't be absorbed in study，resulting from my failing in the examination．I got very discouraging．Just then，my teacher，Miss Zhang，approached me and said，"In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to．It is natural．Don't allow those moments to weaken you，and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself．"Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life．Consequently，I gained that I deserved．

So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all．It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life．

【回答】

1．draw 改为drawing；考查with复合结构．因为Entrance Examination 与动词draw存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故此处用现在分词形式drawing在with复合结构中作宾语补足语．

2．However改为Therefore；考查副词．此处用Therefore表示与上文的递进关系．

3．from改为in；考查动词固定搭配；result in表示"导致"，而result from则表示"由…导致"，结合句意"我不能专心学习，导致了我考试失利"，可知此处应用result in．

4．discouraging改为discouraged；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词修饰物，过去分词作形容词修饰人，故此处应该用过去分词discouraged作形容词．

5．去掉 to；考查动词不定式，分析句子结构可知，what we want 是一个宾语从句，to是多余的，所有要去掉．

6．and改为 but；结合上下文分析句意为"不要让这些时刻削弱了你的能力，而是把它们当成激励你的动力"，所以此处上下文之间是转折关系，故用but．

7．yourself 改为you；考查代词．分析句意为"把它们当成激励你的动力"，此处用人称代词的宾格形式you作作宾语．

8．reminder前加a；考查冠词；此处reminder是可数名词单数形式，所以前面要加"a"．

9．that改为 what；考查名词*从句的连接词．此处宾语从句中缺少宾语，所以用what连接．

10．which改为 that；考查强调句．此处是一个"It is/was+被强调部分+that/who从句"的强调句型，此处被强调的是主语．

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题型：短文改错