假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary发来电子邮件询问你是如何度过上个五一假期的。请你给她回一封电子邮件讲述一下...

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 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary发来电子邮件询问你是如何度过上个五一假期的。请你给她回一封电子邮件讲述一下你的假期之旅并谈谈你的感受。

内容须包括：

（1）Where did you go?

（2）How did you go there?

（3）What did you see?

（4）What did you do?

（5）What do you think of the trip?

要求：词数80左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不记入总词数。

Dear Mary,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my trip during the May Day holiday.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Mary,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my trip during the May Day holiday. My parents and I went to Beijing. We went there by bus. On the first day we visited the Palace Museum. We were excited when we saw it and we took a lot of photos there. On the second day we visited the Great Wall. It was great. On the last day we went shopping in Wangfujing Street. We got back in the evening. I enjoyed my trip very much. It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头；写作是要按照题目要求来写作，注意内容的完整*。同时句子之间的衔接要连贯。

2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称来叙述故事内容符合题目要求；时态采用一般过去时为主，场景描写细致；旅行的过程叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：by bus；On the first day；a lot of；On the second day；went shopping。

句型：We were excited when we saw it and we took a lot of photos there. I enjoyed my trip very much. It was a happy experience and I will never forget it.

知识点：节假日活动

题型：作文