"你养我长大，我陪你变老。"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业是向父母...

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"你养我长大，我陪你变老。"父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要点：

（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；

（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；

（3）拥有爱心，教我学会……；

（4）今天，我要为你们……（自主发挥，至少两点）。

注意事项：

（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。

You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth.

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【回答】

You bring me up．I will be with you in your life．You are important persons in the process of my growth．You give me life and take care of me all the time．（给我生命，一直照顾我成长） When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me． 【高分句型一】 In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education，you always work hard from morning till night． （努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件）Everyone knows you are the persons full of  love．You are ready to help people in need．It is you who teach me to be a kind person．【高分句型二】（拥有爱心，教我做慈爱的人）

Dad and mum，today I'll cook dinner for you．I'll go for a walk with you after dinner．（今天要为父母做的两件事）

I hope you will be happy and healthy forever!

【解析】

When I have problems with my study and life，you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me．当我的学习和生活有问题时，你总是耐心地帮助我，鼓励我．(高分句型一)

when当……时候，引导时间状语从句，adj +enough +to do sth 足够地……可以做某事，

It is you who teach me to be a kind person．是你教会我做一个善良的人．(高分句型一)

本句使用了强调句It is +被强调部分+that/who ...

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