IaswellasmyparentsaregoingtoNewYorkCitythismonth.Ihadbe...

问题详情：

I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful cities all over the world. There are many places of interests where you can learn it in school. I’d also like to see the Empire State Building. Unlucky, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11,2001, or I would have the chance to see them by himself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be unforgettable experience.

【回答】

第一行 are改为am ，had 改为have   

第二行 visit 改为visiting

第三行 interests 改为interest， it 删掉 

第四行 unluck改为unluckily ， in 改为on

第五行 himself 改为myself  

第六行excited改为exciting  ，ungorgettable 前加an

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错