改错：DearJinJing，Yourproblemiscommononeamongmiddleschools...
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改错：Dear Jin Jing，
Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack selfconfidence. The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless someone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours，
Lily
【回答】
【解析】后加a 考查冠词。a common one “一个常见的(问题)”。
ces→advice 考查名词。advice “建议”，是不可数名词。
→of 考查固定短语。first of all “首先；最重要的是”。
4.去掉it 考查定语从句。The first thing (that) you must do中，关系代词that作do的宾语，可省略，故it是多余的。
→louder 考查副词的比较级。由后面的than可知，应用比较级形式。
→them 考查代词。指代前文中的名词classmates，故用代词them。
ng→try 考查祈使句。在祈使句中需用动词原形。
e→shares 考查主谓一致。先行词是a student，故定语从句的谓语动词用单数形式。
ss→If 考查连词。根据句意可知，应是表肯定的假设，表示“如果”。
ibly→possible 考查固定短语。as ... as possible “尽可能……”。
知识点：其他
题型：短文改错
